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I sit and stare at a decreased horizon
Mocked by improvement,
Devoured by development.

I sit and stare at the grass, once so green
Now yellow, as the light from dusk
mixes with light from the street lamps,
The cold sentinels, lining the streets.

I sit on an island of life,
designed for aesthetics,
I stare at the advancing
Stone and tar
Hungry for more.

A last refuge for life,
In the cities of the dead.
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~007Balel Dec 27, 2010  Student Writer
This is amazing.
It reminds me about a time where civilization ends.
I love the imagery you used.
Well done :)
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~Svening-Way Dec 27, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks for the feedback :)
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~007Balel Dec 28, 2010  Student Writer
:)
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~Svening-Way Dec 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconaeolian-wisp:
Very nice work. I really adore the last stanza.

"A last refuge for life,
In the cities of the dead"

It's really very beautiful and ends the poem on such a wonderful note.
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~Svening-Way Dec 13, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks
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:iconcalming-exhale:
wow.. this is really good. :)
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~Svening-Way Dec 8, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconellamarie25:
the words just flow, naturally..
this is really nice.
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